Love at The First Sight

"krrrringggggg..."
      It's 6:30 a.m . Rose was late. She went to school quickly. When she arrived at school, she saw that her chair was sat by a new student. His name is jack, good looking, and rich. rose was love him at the first sight.

"Hey, don't you have any chairs? this is mine!"
"I'm sorry, but I see that ther cahir is special like the owner"
Rose was melted, and let him got the chair
"Oh, it's okay. you can seat on here"

      When she went home, she told to Brian that she have a new student in her class.

"His name is Jack, he so handsomeeeeeee"
"Oh, I know him. He is my old friend when I'm at new york"
"Really? wolud you help me to make him closer to me?"
"Hmmmm.. I can't rose, sorry"
"Why? oh come on, please please pleas"
"Hmm okay"
"Thanks brian"

      The day after, Brian told Rose that Jack like a feminine girl, but rose is a boyish girl. And Rose decided to change her personality. She became a polite and feminine girl. She try to wear dress and heels.

      Day after day, time pas away. Rose and Jack became a close friend, and they have a relationship. Brian was sad when he know that.

      When Rose want to celebrate her anniversary with Jack, she saw that Jack was hang out with other girls. At the time, Rose called Jack

"Honey, where are you?"
"Oh, I'm accompany my mother to go to the hospital"
"Don't be a liar Jack, I ask you one more, whre are you right now?"
"I'm at hospital rose, what happen to you?"
"We're end Jack!"

      Rose close the phone and she cried. than Brian called her, and ask her where she was. Rose just cried and got silent and she close the phone. She did'nt want to eat anything, just cried everyday. And then she got sick.

      Brian was sad that know rose was sick because of it. He persuaded Rose to continue her life. He gave Rose more spirit. And they often to take a walk out side together. Than, Rose began feel pleasant with Brian.

      One day, Brian try to tell Rose that he love her

"Rose, since I meet you, I have a special feeling to you. I'm sorry if I don't tell you about it. I just afraid it can make you stay away for me"
"Brian... thanks for anything that you give to me, I proud of your braveness to tell it"
"So do you want to be my girlfriend?"
"Yes I do"
"Oh thanks god, I love you Rose"

YES!!!

Mr. Jhonny and Mrs. Jenny just married in the beginning of 2012.

 Mr. Jhonny  went to the car’s showroom because he wanted to buy the most sophisticated  car  to his wife.

Jinny    : Morning, Sir. My name is Jinny, may I help you?

Jhonny : I’m looking for a new car, but that car must be the only one in the world.

Jinny    : Wow! How fortunate you are, Sir! We just launched our new  product. This car is controlled  by                voice.

Jhonny : How does it work?

Jinny    : This car has keywords, to go forward you must say “yes” and to stop you must say “no”.

Jhonny : Fabulous!! I buy it!

Then, Mr. Jhonny went home with his new car.

Jhonny : Honey…! Look! What I’ve bought to you…

Jenny   :Wow honey! What a perfect gift! You always know how to make me satisfied. I’m insanely love  you.

Jhonny : That’s why I belong to you. Ok honey, let’s go to the Couple Hill to see this town by using this car.

Jenny   : Sure, I will babe… I’ll follow where ever you go.

So, they went to the hill. But, the car accelerated and Mr. Jhonny was panic and forgot about the keyword. Suddenly… Mr. Jhonny shouted.

Jhonny: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

And the car automatically stopped. Mr. and Mrs. Jhonny feel spacious.

Jenny  : Yeeeeeessssss!!!! We’re safe!!

Finally, the car bumped the wall in front of them. And both of them were died.

 

Text Analysing:

• Orientation: 

           Mr. Jhonny and Mrs. Jenny just married in the beginning of 2012. Mr. Jhonny wanted to buy the most sophisticated  car  to his wife

• Event 1: 

           Jinny told the keyword to use the car.

• Event 2: 

           Jhonny surprised his wife by buying a new car went home.

• Twist: 

         Mr. Jhonny and Mrs. Jenny died because Mrs. Jenny said “YES” 

 XI Science 1

Amalia Putri Id'Adha     (04)

Fauzal Sidiq Widayanto (12)

Metha Husada Persiwi   (18)

First Time

There was a poor guy named Edy and rich guy named  Deny. Edy was  Deny’s bestfriend.

            One day, Edy asked Deny to seeing round the town with his new helicopter.

“Come on Edy, let’s see the city’s view from the air with my new toy”.

“I want to, but I’m fear to heights”

It’s okay, you’ll be fine with me”. 

            And then finally Edy went with Deny. In the helicopter, “Fasten your seatbelt, Ed!”, deny said. 

            “Okay!”, Edy closed his eyes.

             And after  a view minutes he opened it and said, “Wow! Look, Deny!! Those people are so small!!! Just like ants!”

“Yes they are, Den! They are ants, we’re not fliying yet!!”

                   Text Analysing:

• Orientation:  

                    Edy was a poor guy and Deny was a rich guy, but both of them were bestfriend.

• Event: 

                     Deny asked Edy to seeing the town  with his new helicopter

• Twist: 

                      Edy thought the ants are people though they’re not fliying yet.

XI Science 1

Amalia Putri Id'Adha     (04)

Fauzal Sidiq Widayanto (12)

Metha Husada Persiwi   (18)

Not Late, Too Early

Ijal was an employee in a renowned company. He was a hard worker, but he often come late due to himself that couldn’t woke up early.

One day, Ijal came late again. This time he got a warning from his boss. “Ijal! I can’t tolerate this again. You often come late. Do you still want to work here?”, asked the boss angrily.

“Yes, I do. But I can’t cope with my problem. I can’t wake up early.

What must I do?”, asked Ijal.

“Why do you need to be perplexed? Do you have a wallet?”, asked the boss.

“Yes, I do.”, replied Ijal. “What’s in it?”, asked the boss again.

“Only some money.”, said Ijal.

“Hah, use that money to buy an alarm clock. Do you understand?”, asked the boss.

“Yes, I do. Thank you.”, said Ijal.

         When Ijal went home, he went  to a clock shop first. “What can I do for you, Sir?”, asked the shopkeeper.

“I want to purchase an alarm clock and I want the best alarm clock that you have.”, said Ijal to the shopkeeper. “We has a newest special alarm clock. It’s a sophisticated clock.”, replied the shopkeeper. “It looks like a usual clock. Why do you call it sophisticated?”, asked Ijal.

“Nice question. May be it looks like a usual alarm clock, but you see this clock has a touch screen feature. When you draw the hour hand and the minute hand, the alarm will ring according to the drawing, and it can be erased. Very accurate and easy to use”, explained the shopkeeper.

             “Hmm.... It sounds attractive. How does it cost?”, asked Ijal.

          “Actually it costs 100,000 dollars. But, because it’s a new product, you just have to pay 25.000 dollars. What’s your opinion?”, asked the shopkeeper.

              “Wow.... Really? OK, I buy it. Here is the money.”, said Ijal. “OK, and here is the clock. Thank you for coming here, Sir.”, said the shopkeeper. Ijal went home, he was very happy with his new alarm clock. At night, he tested the clock. “Now, I’ll test this clock. What time is it? Oh, seven o’clock. Tomorrow I have to work at nine o’clock, so I will set the alarm at eight o’clock. OK, now it’s time to sleep.”, said Ijal.

                Then, the alarm clock rang. Kriiiiiiiingggg...... Kriiiiiiinggggg.

               “I’m still sleepy. Wow.... The time went very fast. What time is it? Oh, eight o’clock. Hah, this clock rings on time, I’m very proud of it. I’ll bring it and show it to boss. Now, it’s time to go work.”, said Ijal.

                At nine o’clock, Ijal arrived at his office. He saw that the office was still quiet, he thought he was the first employee that came to the office. Then, he saw his boss and greet her.

                “Good morning, Boss.”, said Ijal. “Good morning. Wait, why are you still here? And what have you say? Good morning? Are you crazy? It’s still night.”, said the boss. “What? Impossible, it’s morning. I have bought an alarm clock yesterday, that’s why I’m not late. Look, it’s still a quarter to nine.”, said Ijal.

                “Hah, you must be stress. What time did you go to sleep?”, asked the boss. “I slept at seven o’clock and set the alarm at eight o’clock. This is the clock.”, said Ijal.

                “Aha, that’s your fatal mistake. Do you still remember, this clock is a twelve-hour alarm clock, means it only shows the next twelve hours from now. So, if you slept at seven o’clock and set the alarm at eight o’clock, your time to sleep is only one hour, right?”, said the boss.

                “You’re right. But, I still don’t believe it’s still night.”, said Ijal. “Look out and check it.”, said the boss.

                Ijal looked out and he was shocked with what he saw. “Oh My God, it’s really still night. So, this means I don’t be late, but I come too early. Very, very early.”, said Ijal.

                 Text Analyzing:

• Orientation:

                   Ijal was an employee and he often come late.

• Event 1:

Ijal’s boss was angry with Ijal because he often come late and command him to buy an alarm clock.

• Event 2:

Ijal bought a sophisticated alarm clock and set tested the clock. He was satisfied because the alarm clock work well.

•  Event 3:

             Ijal went to his office and having a tense conversation with his boss.

• Twist:

            Ijal realized that he had come to his office too early.

XI Science 1

Amalia Putri Id'Adha     (04)

Fauzal Sidiq Widayanto (12)

Metha Husada Persiwi   (18)